Peer+Revise+worksheet.

name of the person who revised this paper _______ Can you see the beginning, middle and end of this paper? Yes, comment Sort of, comment Not really, comment Does this paper have a creative title? Yes, comment Not really, suggestions Does this paper have a snappy opening sentence? Yes, why? Not really, suggestions Does this paper have a voice for its audience? (the audience is this class) Yes, why? Sort of, comment Not really, suggestions Does this paper have any boring, tired words? List the boring words Does this paper have sentences of different length? Yes They are all about the same length and the author should change some to different lengths. Suggestions Does this paper stretch the truth to make it more interesting? Yes, where? No, but it should. Suggestions Does the person this paper is about AUTHORIZE this as an acceptable part of their biography? Yes Maybe No
 * Biography Peer Revise**