Biography+Student+Examples

Escape From Death
It all started in the year 2003, when Suzy of Hong Kong heard the news of SARS, a deadly disease similar to pneumonia. Suzy quotes, "You get it, you die!" This highly contagious disease travels through your lungs, and causes you to have trouble breathing. This disease does not kill you instantly, but it doesn't have a cure. She says, "It was so scary. Once you get the disease, you are put in a room all by yourself and left there to die." Well, after the news of SARS struck Hong Kong, the Li family immediately immigrated to Pleasantville, New York, and stayed there until SARS was over. During the three months they stayed at their uncle's house, a large, peach colored, two story brick building (she wishes it had been made of human hair, mud, and clay) with a red roof in New York, Suzy confesses that she and her brother committed murder. A couple of pesky spiders, some ants, and a single fly with giant red eyes, were smashed and drowned. It was FUN she says, although she missed her Hong Kong friends. Once a spider jumped on her toe, and she screamed and ran out of the house! She's brave enough to squish them, why is she scared of them if they're on her toe? Hmm. But Besides having killed bugs, Suzy went to her uncle's ice cream shop every day after an exhausting day at Austin Road Academy. Eating lots of ice cream cooled her down. Especially when she squirted "mounds" of icing into her mouth. Once she even set millipedes free in her uncle's ice cream store. How nice. But then she "unfreed" them, and kept them. They soon died though. No. It wasn't from SARS. Maybe it was from lack of food, but the world may never know. Maybe she thought she was, but when Suzy planted dandelions in her uncle's backyard, that had slopes with bushes along the sides, she wasn't really thanking her uncle for the ice cream. Instead, this made her uncle expand with anger. After the scary explosion, her uncle hired someone to take the dandelions out. She never planted dandelions after that. You may have thought Suzy would never go into her uncle's yard after the dandelion incident, but she did. This time though, she didn't cause any mayhem. Nobody was hurt except the grass. Suzy loved rolling down the grassy slope in her uncle's yard, though it would make her slightly dizzy afterwards, but what else was she supposed to do? Dig up worms? The answer is yes. Digging up worms was a main hobby for Suzy throughout these months. Her uncle had a huge lake, where Suzy and her brother would go "fishing," using helpless, squishy worms as bait. They didn't really catch and eat the fish though (that would have gotten their uncle pretty angry), instead, they just caught them, and put them back in the water. By the pond, there lived some geese. Suzy enjoyed feeding the geese, and watching them gobble up the food they got.
 * Biographical incident of Suzy**

September 4th 2006

The Skiing Fiasco
Oh No! Bystanders screamed as Fred tumbled down the skiing bill at //99// miles per hour! BANG! He landed painfully on his left arm! //"Ouch"// Fred shouted as be lay down flinching on the cold white snow. He had been skiing in Seoul the capital of South Korea with a bunch of lst-4th graders in the same TaeKwondo Group, in which most of them were his friends. 20-30 people were with him including the instructors and the sensei. It was a noon in late gone and "the snow was beginning to fall. All around him people where chatting and autumn during the end of 2002 and he was in //2n6i// grade when the all the leaves were talking in the resort and all around the Earth was a piece of white. He was an outstanding skier with some experience but this had been his first "real" accident. Back up on the hill be was skiing swiftly downhill when be saw another skier standing idly in front of him, by instinct he quickly swerved, on of the way only to see another skier in fr//ont// of him! He tried to dodge but it was //too// late, be hadn't been fast enough to dodge and ended up tripping //over// the other skier's skies and slid downhill painfully. With a bump be landed on him left arm, his arm was throbbing and so were his legs. He thought that his arm was fine except it hurt a lot. He winced as be got up and skied down with his right arm only! After going down instead //of// staying at the bottom with everybody else be went back up the bill. This time he skied down slowly without another accident. After that ski it was time go home. After that he went home and thought everything was fine and dandy and that his arm would recover and there was nothing serious, if that have been the case this story would have ended and would have been very short and boring, but the story isn't //over// yet. After 2 days his mother decided to visit his doctor because the hadn't stop but actually increased His doctor cbecked his arm, gave him an X-Ray before finally deciding that his arm (from his wrist up to his elbows) bone had broke and he had to have a cast //for// a little //over a// month.